Space L Clottey

Okay, what’s happening in chapter 13?

What is the choice?

Message

Always refer to Floop as the “alien”, “sokotian” or “Floop”, never the man. Heye is always “the boy” or “heye”

Better to have a less complicated story that is easy to understand what’s going on with tonnes of subtext, then something too complicated to understand what’s happening.

Better to have somethign slightly dumber that’s way less complicated then something very complicated.

I wonder, if I wrote out everything that happens beat by beat if I’d find places easy to shorten it down.

I kinda wanna do that, but that would indeed require music.

Okay, play by play of everything that happens